Oh my lord... the LIs in this are so good. I'm loving Arthur and Yves most, but honestly can't wait to try all of them. That little interaction with Arthur at the end of chapter one left me wanting so much more! Seriously, your writing is amazing, the premise of the story is really good, and the only thing that absolutely kills me is the time between updates. Sigh. 💔
Not gonna lie the idea of playing a mole in a Group of heroes and the game expects you to join with them maybe be turned against your cause only to eventually reveal you were always loyal to your true queen is an appealing concept.
broo, i loved this game so much. im contemplating who im liking more- gale, authur or yvette (its leaning more on gale at first place then maybe yvette), and the pendant decision was so hard to make. its a well made game, and i cant wait for more updates.
Thank you! Not going to lie, I'm so glad that the pendant decision turned out to be tough for the players! I guess even more so if you are wavering between Gale and Yvette/Yves 😅
yesss, it did NOT help that both those characters were my top favourites, it was genuinely the first decision i had a hard time picking between, out of all the IFs i read, i did end up giving the pendant to gale.
I'm inlove with this and am already crafting theories about MC's past and power. Honestly I'm most excited to learn about the sixth sister, and see if it has anything to do with our past.
I also noticed the codex mentions the Belladona, a poisonous flower, which we have not interacted with in the game. I was just wondering why that is in the codex?
So glad you've enjoyed it! The Sixth Sister and that power most definitely play a role in the story, so stay tuned!
Bellona is mentioned as it's the main component in the concoction, the consumption of which grants a person the ability to block and disable magical powers. You might have seen that to some degree in the interactions with Arthur. The flower and the poison will also make frequent appearances in the story later down the line. Another reason is that the legend of the flower's appearance in this world offers some necessary glimpses into the story of the Fourth Sister.
This had such a tense magical yet dark moment, the way you were able to weave words into something eerie yet had light hearted moments really made me hooked. I love how the Gray Regent and MC's relationship is because when I think of the Grey Regent I imagined them to be cold and stern, but I was pleasantly surprised to see that they were calmer and nicer in some extent. Jax was also a fun person to banter around with even though they were our handler. The one I'm iffy about is the three (Gale, Arthur, and Darla) but it's to be expected since they're enemies to the MC so we have like a slowburn with them. I did vibe a bit more with Arthur purely because he shared the same dry humor as me.
Aside from that, I really looked forward to what has come, though I'd probably like it if the background wasn't all that bright since it made scanning through the words a bit tricky. Good luck with this one!
Thank you so much for such a lovely message! The face the Gray Regent shows to the MC is indeed somewhat different than they do to the others, but my intention was to fairly show that it is not an...expected response.
As to your note about the colors, I'm assuming you read with the default look of the game? If so, you can play around with the settings menu that you can bring up by clicking Settings on the left-hand side sidebar of the game page. You can increase the font size and change to the dark theme if that would be easier on your eyes!
You have managed to create such a mysterious, dangerous, suspicious and sinister atmosphere in the released chapters and it's keeping me at the edge of my seat! Even on those "tender" moments I can't help feeling something isn't quite right.
I have two questions:
1) In the current magic system, is there any spell known to extract information, subtly and from a great distance, from an individual's mind even without them knowing?
2 )Did Y suspect MC was sent as a spy from their enemies/opposing factions?
Reasonable ofc yet how did they manage to clear their doubts for MC? HOW can magic determine with absolute certainty MC has amnesia? Are they keeping MC close to keep an eye on them? THAT'S a more sound theory for someone as cautios as they are.
I cannot tell you how exactly they have cleared up those suspicions for themselves as that would be spoilers, but I will say as follows. Although the MC has been formally questioned about anything they could remember (which was basically nothing), they have never directly faced any accusations or suspicions from the Gray Regent about that.
It depends on whether or not your MC uses magic as their primary weapon (lowers the chance), whether they offed the thug in the prologue (lowers the chance), whether they got ambushed by the trio or walked up to them on their own terms and on the MC's responses to the questions asked. The more info they reveal, the higher the chance, up to you.
I have to say that this is one of the coolest stories i have read so far. Unfortunately I have encountered an error and can't seem to move forward from this point
Thank you so much, glad that you're liking it! It is unfortunate about the issue, but I seem to have cracked it. I've just uploaded a version that should allow you to move forward, so please update the page and it should work! Let me know if that didn't help.
Thank you so much for verifying, it's so precious because the issue is very dependent on the browser version. I'm glad it works now and hope you enjoy! 🤍
I really liked the game❤️. It kept me occupied for quite a while and I'll eagerly wait for more.
Currently I like the Yves RO. Let alone for the mystery of it. I'm not entirely, convinced that harbouring the MC is all that innocent and I like the ongoing questions one asks oneself regarding Yves possible involvement regarding MCs amnesia and such. Well, the same goes for Jax, though.
I also replayed to a save from which I'll try the other ROs -omce more content regarding them is Out, that is. I think the next one will be Arthur for sure. Just for the fun of it - it's always interesting to see how far a character can change their first opinion of an MC if pursued. I love a well written change of heart -sprinkled with angst and possibly some hurt along the way 🤔😅
Hey, loved reading your thoughts! I'm honor-bound not to reveal anything regarding motivations, but it's always exciting to see how people perceive the characters without that particular knowledge. Thank you for sharing!
Free of any noticeable grammar errors, has complex characters and a unique writing style which leaves you craving for more, this is one of the WiPs whose progress I'm going to enjoy following the most :)
I loved the update! When they're asking your name and they question your last name it would be funny if you tell them you dont remember, if you told them about your memory loss and they get annoyed and just tell you to make one up then or something xD
lmao, I mean you are kind of rolling with a fake name already, but I've thought of an interaction to add based on your comment for this outcome for the MC 👀 will add that some time soon! Thank you!
The characters and their motivations, as well as the available choices are great, i can't wait for more content for this impressive story which is so intriguing and good already ❤
Having a fantastic time with this so far! Your writing is delightful, smart and descriptive and extremely fun to play through. Looking forward to seeing how things play out <3
As for the next update, I've been getting back on track with writing, and I'm over the half of the next portion of content I intend to publish. As for now I tentatively say "this month".
hey there! really enjoying this so far, your characters and worldbuilding really intrigue me!
just wanted to let you know that i chose to use they/them pronouns, and in my profile it said things such as 'they is' which should be changed to 'they are'? very minor thing, no other bugs with this that i noticed though :)
Ngl this story is really interesting me. I am so curious of this world you created even though i have read my own fair share of text adventure games already. Also do you perhaps have any you will recommend?
Thank you! Happy to see it has caught your interest and excited to share more about the world! For a recommendation, do you have a genre that you prefer?
...romance. I am fine with horror and all that as well. I don't have any triggers as well. Tbh I just think I would like anything you would recommend because I didn't imagine I would find a story that I liked as much as yours. So go wild with any recs
I also have a question if you don't mind, will this game be released in chapters or will you finish the game and release it? Sorry if this question was already answered I just found this demo yesterday.
So at one point, and I think this is just some slight code variable error that accidentally got left, I saw this image and thought something was wrong, is this normal or actually an error?
oops, thank you for finding this and for letting me know, definitely a code problem! sorry for that, I have just uploaded a quickfix, so if you have a save somewhere before this scene, you could replay it without this issue!
I really like it so far. Especially the choice first where you choose magic or weapon and if it's usually mc's prefered style that was really cool.. I also like where the choices have the reason for mc's action... I think I might get hooked.. certainly has the potential to be one of the greatest ifs out there.. great work 👍
thank you!! I'm glad you found the diversity of the choices to your liking, the ones you have mentioned are very important both short- and long-term, so I'm excited to show where they will take the player! and omg, thank you for the praise, hoping to live up to the expectations ☺
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Oh my lord... the LIs in this are so good. I'm loving Arthur and Yves most, but honestly can't wait to try all of them. That little interaction with Arthur at the end of chapter one left me wanting so much more!
Seriously, your writing is amazing, the premise of the story is really good, and the only thing that absolutely kills me is the time between updates. Sigh. 💔
Absolutely adore this!! <333
Just found this game a few days ago, Its the best I've read on here so far!!!
Look forward to the next chapter!
Not gonna lie the idea of playing a mole in a Group of heroes and the game expects you to join with them maybe be turned against your cause only to eventually reveal you were always loyal to your true queen is an appealing concept.
You get it! 😁
Just found this, and I love it so much!
Definitely one of the best demos I've read this year.
Omg, thank you! Happy you've enjoyed it!
broo, i loved this game so much. im contemplating who im liking more- gale, authur or yvette (its leaning more on gale at first place then maybe yvette), and the pendant decision was so hard to make. its a well made game, and i cant wait for more updates.
Thank you! Not going to lie, I'm so glad that the pendant decision turned out to be tough for the players! I guess even more so if you are wavering between Gale and Yvette/Yves 😅
yesss, it did NOT help that both those characters were my top favourites, it was genuinely the first decision i had a hard time picking between, out of all the IFs i read, i did end up giving the pendant to gale.
I'm inlove with this and am already crafting theories about MC's past and power. Honestly I'm most excited to learn about the sixth sister, and see if it has anything to do with our past.
I also noticed the codex mentions the Belladona, a poisonous flower, which we have not interacted with in the game. I was just wondering why that is in the codex?
So glad you've enjoyed it! The Sixth Sister and that power most definitely play a role in the story, so stay tuned!
Bellona is mentioned as it's the main component in the concoction, the consumption of which grants a person the ability to block and disable magical powers. You might have seen that to some degree in the interactions with Arthur. The flower and the poison will also make frequent appearances in the story later down the line. Another reason is that the legend of the flower's appearance in this world offers some necessary glimpses into the story of the Fourth Sister.
This had such a tense magical yet dark moment, the way you were able to weave words into something eerie yet had light hearted moments really made me hooked. I love how the Gray Regent and MC's relationship is because when I think of the Grey Regent I imagined them to be cold and stern, but I was pleasantly surprised to see that they were calmer and nicer in some extent. Jax was also a fun person to banter around with even though they were our handler. The one I'm iffy about is the three (Gale, Arthur, and Darla) but it's to be expected since they're enemies to the MC so we have like a slowburn with them. I did vibe a bit more with Arthur purely because he shared the same dry humor as me.
Aside from that, I really looked forward to what has come, though I'd probably like it if the background wasn't all that bright since it made scanning through the words a bit tricky. Good luck with this one!
Thank you so much for such a lovely message! The face the Gray Regent shows to the MC is indeed somewhat different than they do to the others, but my intention was to fairly show that it is not an...expected response.
As to your note about the colors, I'm assuming you read with the default look of the game? If so, you can play around with the settings menu that you can bring up by clicking Settings on the left-hand side sidebar of the game page. You can increase the font size and change to the dark theme if that would be easier on your eyes!
Ah now that makes sense HAHAHA I'll be sure to do that!
You have managed to create such a mysterious, dangerous, suspicious and sinister atmosphere in the released chapters and it's keeping me at the edge of my seat! Even on those "tender" moments I can't help feeling something isn't quite right.
I have two questions:
1) In the current magic system, is there any spell known to extract information, subtly and from a great distance, from an individual's mind even without them knowing?
2 )Did Y suspect MC was sent as a spy from their enemies/opposing factions?
Oh, that is so exciting! Really glad it's a gripping read for you!
1) what a cool question it is... I will neither confirm nor deny anything, but certain things you have described may indeed be possible :)
2) for someone of that standing, it would be a reasonable thing to suspect, no?
Reasonable ofc yet how did they manage to clear their doubts for MC? HOW can magic determine with absolute certainty MC has amnesia? Are they keeping MC close to keep an eye on them? THAT'S a more sound theory for someone as cautios as they are.
I cannot tell you how exactly they have cleared up those suspicions for themselves as that would be spoilers, but I will say as follows. Although the MC has been formally questioned about anything they could remember (which was basically nothing), they have never directly faced any accusations or suspicions from the Gray Regent about that.
What are the flags for Gale accepting the necklace deal? I triggered it on my first readthrough but he was unphased on my second.
It depends on whether or not your MC uses magic as their primary weapon (lowers the chance), whether they offed the thug in the prologue (lowers the chance), whether they got ambushed by the trio or walked up to them on their own terms and on the MC's responses to the questions asked. The more info they reveal, the higher the chance, up to you.
I have to say that this is one of the coolest stories i have read so far. Unfortunately I have encountered an error and can't seem to move forward from this point
Thank you so much, glad that you're liking it! It is unfortunate about the issue, but I seem to have cracked it. I've just uploaded a version that should allow you to move forward, so please update the page and it should work! Let me know if that didn't help.
It worked! Thank you so much 💙. This game is a masterpiece. Thank you for making it happen
Thank you so much for verifying, it's so precious because the issue is very dependent on the browser version. I'm glad it works now and hope you enjoy! 🤍
I really liked the game❤️. It kept me occupied for quite a while and I'll eagerly wait for more.
Currently I like the Yves RO. Let alone for the mystery of it. I'm not entirely, convinced that harbouring the MC is all that innocent and I like the ongoing questions one asks oneself regarding Yves possible involvement regarding MCs amnesia and such. Well, the same goes for Jax, though.
I also replayed to a save from which I'll try the other ROs -omce more content regarding them is Out, that is. I think the next one will be Arthur for sure. Just for the fun of it - it's always interesting to see how far a character can change their first opinion of an MC if pursued. I love a well written change of heart -sprinkled with angst and possibly some hurt along the way 🤔😅
Keep up the good work 😊
Hey, loved reading your thoughts! I'm honor-bound not to reveal anything regarding motivations, but it's always exciting to see how people perceive the characters without that particular knowledge. Thank you for sharing!
Free of any noticeable grammar errors, has complex characters and a unique writing style which leaves you craving for more, this is one of the WiPs whose progress I'm going to enjoy following the most :)
Omg, thanks! Happy to have you on board!
Update was fantastic! I love this so much, the characters are all great and the writing is amazing!
Thank you, glad you're enjoying!
I loved the update! When they're asking your name and they question your last name it would be funny if you tell them you dont remember, if you told them about your memory loss and they get annoyed and just tell you to make one up then or something xD
lmao, I mean you are kind of rolling with a fake name already, but I've thought of an interaction to add based on your comment for this outcome for the MC 👀 will add that some time soon! Thank you!
I loved the demo! All the characters seem intriguing and I can't wait to find out more about them. what an amazing job of a game :)
Thank you so much!!
Amazing writing, super interested in more.
Thank you, hope you'll enjoy the update :)
The characters and their motivations, as well as the available choices are great, i can't wait for more content for this impressive story which is so intriguing and good already ❤
Thank you, really happy to see the motivations come through ☺
RIGHT WHEN IT GOT GOOD IT WAS THE END OF THE DEMO but this was the best IF ive ever seen
Thank you, such honor!!
Having a fantastic time with this so far! Your writing is delightful, smart and descriptive and extremely fun to play through. Looking forward to seeing how things play out <3
Thank you so much, really appreciate your comment <3 So glad you've had a blast!
Seems like an interesting story so far! It definitely has my interest. I'm looking forward to how it will develop ♥
thank you!!
Amazing start! A fascinating world and its lore! Do you have a release date planned for the next chapter?
Thank you, happy you are liking it!
As for the next update, I've been getting back on track with writing, and I'm over the half of the next portion of content I intend to publish. As for now I tentatively say "this month".
So far it has been captivating, can't wait to read more!
thank you, I'm glad to hear that!
nice , but when will be the next chapter released ?
hi! Thank you for the interest, I'm aiming to release the next part in late August.
👀 can't wait to read more, really loving this so far!
hey there! really enjoying this so far, your characters and worldbuilding really intrigue me!
just wanted to let you know that i chose to use they/them pronouns, and in my profile it said things such as 'they is' which should be changed to 'they are'? very minor thing, no other bugs with this that i noticed though :)
thank you, glad to learn you are enjoying it! 😊
and thank you very much for pointing out the issue in the character description page, it has been fixed now!
Ngl this story is really interesting me. I am so curious of this world you created even though i have read my own fair share of text adventure games already. Also do you perhaps have any you will recommend?
Thank you! Happy to see it has caught your interest and excited to share more about the world! For a recommendation, do you have a genre that you prefer?
...romance. I am fine with horror and all that as well. I don't have any triggers as well. Tbh I just think I would like anything you would recommend because I didn't imagine I would find a story that I liked as much as yours. So go wild with any recs
Thank you, I'm very honored! Consider these then:
https://idrellegames.itch.io/wayfarer
https://dashingdon.com/play/parivir/a-mage-reborn/mygame/
https://dashingdon.com/play/loldemort/shepherds-of-haven-demo/mygame/
https://dashingdon.com/play/pheo/the-exile/mygame/
Created an account just to say that this is one of the best games that i have played
I'm incredibly glad to have developed something you liked so much! Thank you for letting me know!
I also have a question if you don't mind, will this game be released in chapters or will you finish the game and release it? Sorry if this question was already answered I just found this demo yesterday.
No worries, it's a very fair question! I plan on regularly updating it in a cadence between one and two months until completion.
Thanks!
wow <3
thank you! 😄
So at one point, and I think this is just some slight code variable error that accidentally got left, I saw this image and thought something was wrong, is this normal or actually an error?
oops, thank you for finding this and for letting me know, definitely a code problem! sorry for that, I have just uploaded a quickfix, so if you have a save somewhere before this scene, you could replay it without this issue!
I love the writing style and the overall story tone so much- so excited and curious to see where this goes!
thank you! glad the style and the tone stood out to you, it's very gratifying to read such comments 🤗
Ooooh this is good!
thank you!~
I really like it so far. Especially the choice first where you choose magic or weapon and if it's usually mc's prefered style that was really cool.. I also like where the choices have the reason for mc's action... I think I might get hooked.. certainly has the potential to be one of the greatest ifs out there.. great work 👍
thank you!! I'm glad you found the diversity of the choices to your liking, the ones you have mentioned are very important both short- and long-term, so I'm excited to show where they will take the player! and omg, thank you for the praise, hoping to live up to the expectations ☺
thank you for the reply
internal squealing >~<can't wait to see how the story unfolds. good luck and keep up with the good work 👍👍